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Ark Knight

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This is an early version of my Ark knight that is mentioned in my game mythology, I will be doing another version once I get feedback.

OK so hear is the rundown, this is heavy power armor that has 2 pilots, one pilot controls the Armor via mind control, the other pilot meditates and creates the power that the Armor runes of (I will go into more depth on how this works at a later date).

I know there isn't much to go on in this pic for feedback but I will be happy to hear any ideas or concerns you may have thanks in advance.

WIP of his nemeses
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Vision: I think overall a good idea! As far as I can tell you have captured what you set out too. There is not a ton going on and its not overly fancy, but you achieved the goal of presenting the mecha efficiently.

Originality: I gave you full stars here, simply because the idea seems so creative to me. I have seen a lot of mecha related shows and stories, and though there are some piloted by focus, there are few powered by TWO pilots. Using a single person as a power source and another as the actual pilot is unique. A great concept that I believe you could tap more potential from. (Perhaps using multiple meditating humans for larger mecha?)

Technique: 3.5 simply because its a straight forward painting, not a whole lot going on in the effects or background (however a simplish background is probably preferable) The chrome looking armor is done well enough to achieve the effect I think. The view on the right of the focused power is awfully interesting.

Impact: Nicely done overall. I didnt just throw things with excitement, but its a well designed piece and enjoyable to look at. Not a whole lot of detail elements, I think your stats could be extended to show more information but overall, a well done piece sir! Good job. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title="=) (Smile)"/>